Dear Steve
I cried when I heard you died
Not even a year since being a groom
Your bride shook at the viewing, I watched in silence
Feeling her pain
Months before
You had shared with me , your love story
I had smiled, assuming
kindness would bring kindness
And you would experience love , for years, in it's glory
I know you were not unnerved
That you would feel that God had a reason
but I still can not find an answer
Why you two can not be dancing on this earth
To continue your new life with you virgin wife
To have the joy you deserved
Sincerely, Your sad friend
Antoinette
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Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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Comments (5)
I'm so sorry for your loss. Beautifully penned Epistolary ♥️ for your friend.
This was touching and poignant. I’m sorry for your loss.
Beautifully penned! I'm sorry 4 your loss!
I'm so sorry for your loss 🥺
A very touching letter. Well done!