Each fractal flake is
A fluke of nature that
Falls unique upon concrete and
Freezes grass and
Flows,
Across roads
As winds pick up speed
And children build men.
My kingdom for two sticks
And a carrot.
A boy and girl
Rub chilly noses
Like the eskimoses
And grow up to exchange roses
It’s a shame I must
Take a credit card
And scrape away the magic
Just to see where I am going
The spidery fronds crawling
Across the innocent windshield,
Everywhere I look
Encased in sparkly white
Doth nature dare to melt this away
Too quickly?
About the Creator
Daniel J. Heck
Poet, journaler, short fiction composer, interactive story writer, board game designer. I believe in the power of multiple creative voices within one person, and of variety as the spice of life!
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Answer: not too soon for Canadians, forsooth!