The Weight of Whisper
The soft words that steady us—and how quiet can carry a life.

The Weight of Whisper
It arrives lighter than lint,
Yet the room leans.
A breath shaped to a syllable,
placed just behind my ear,
and suddenly the table steadies,
The clock stands up straighter,
The window forgets to rattle.
We talk about loud things
as if force were meaning.
But I have seen a whisper
turn a whole life—
like a small hand on a ship’s wheel,
patient with storms.
Your hush carries cargo:
unpacked tenderness,
instructions for breathing,
a map folded into the margin
of my name.
When fear grows teeth,
You speak in cloth—
words soft enough to cover me
without hiding me.
The bite remembers it was once raining.
I have carried shouts.
They burn fast, bright, and brief.
Whispers are different:
they anchor;
They teach the bones.
How to listen from the inside out.
On mornings I’m made of glass,
You choose a sentence that won’t crack me.
It lands, a coin in the old well of my chest,
rings once, then settles—
wealth that doesn’t glitter
But buys me the next step.
People say secrets whisper.
So does mercy.
So do doors when they’ve decided
not to slam anymore.
If there is a weight to this,
It is the kind that keeps a letter
from drifting off the porch—
a stone smooth with certainty,
tucked into the envelope of evening.
Say it again, that small truth.
Let it tip me toward the better edge,
toward the place where quiet gathers
its strength—
not heavy, not hollow,
but held.
About the Creator
Milan Milic
Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.



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