The Way the Earth Breathes
maybe nature isn’t some distant beauty
I woke before the sun,
not for any reason
just because the light slipped through the blinds.
Outside, the trees were already busy,
holding conversations in rustles and hushes,
and a crow shouted something urgent
that only he seemed to know the answer to.
I took my coffee to the porch,
barefoot,
because some mornings ask for feet
to meet the ground,
for soles to remember
they came from soil.
A spider had woven a cathedral
between the railing and the rosebush
I nearly destroyed it with my distracted hand
but paused,
and she stayed still,
like she was praying
I wouldn’t.
There’s something so painfully alive
in the way leaves tremble
when no one’s watching,
or how a stream
can mirror the sky
better than we do each other.
And I thought
maybe nature isn’t some distant beauty
we escape to,
but the quiet persistence
of being part of something
that keeps choosing
to grow
anyway.
A dandelion cracked the concrete
beside the driveway.
I almost pulled it,
but left it there.
It looked like hope.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.




Comments (3)
Nice
Wow. Such an ode to nature. I am avid nature lover. I do the same. Let spider make cobweb. Dandelion and spurge inspire me. I try to walk gently on nature.
I love writing about nature and this poem hit the spot with me! The lines: Outside, the trees were already busy, holding conversations in rustles and hushes spoke to me - I'm always wondering about the trees; if they warn one another when the cruncher is coming to make a new road… then the spider web, so beautiful Just a rich, gorgeously wrought poem. Thank you!!