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The Way the Earth Breathes

maybe nature isn’t some distant beauty

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 6 months ago Updated 6 months ago 1 min read
The Way the Earth Breathes
Photo by American Jael on Unsplash

I woke before the sun,

not for any reason

just because the light slipped through the blinds.

Outside, the trees were already busy,

holding conversations in rustles and hushes,

and a crow shouted something urgent

that only he seemed to know the answer to.

I took my coffee to the porch,

barefoot,

because some mornings ask for feet

to meet the ground,

for soles to remember

they came from soil.

A spider had woven a cathedral

between the railing and the rosebush

I nearly destroyed it with my distracted hand

but paused,

and she stayed still,

like she was praying

I wouldn’t.

There’s something so painfully alive

in the way leaves tremble

when no one’s watching,

or how a stream

can mirror the sky

better than we do each other.

And I thought

maybe nature isn’t some distant beauty

we escape to,

but the quiet persistence

of being part of something

that keeps choosing

to grow

anyway.

A dandelion cracked the concrete

beside the driveway.

I almost pulled it,

but left it there.

It looked like hope.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Muhammad Saeed6 months ago

    Nice

  • Seema Patel6 months ago

    Wow. Such an ode to nature. I am avid nature lover. I do the same. Let spider make cobweb. Dandelion and spurge inspire me. I try to walk gently on nature.

  • Andrea Corwin 6 months ago

    I love writing about nature and this poem hit the spot with me! The lines: Outside, the trees were already busy, holding conversations in rustles and hushes spoke to me - I'm always wondering about the trees; if they warn one another when the cruncher is coming to make a new road… then the spider web, so beautiful Just a rich, gorgeously wrought poem. Thank you!!

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