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The Waiting Room

Sensory Poem #2

By Hope MartinPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Waiting Room
Photo by engin akyurt on Unsplash

The smell of antiseptic and disinfectant is the best part of the day.

The drab floors and flourescent lighting are making my eyes hurt.

Pain fills my entire body as I shift around the waiting room chair.

Thirsty, throat sore, mouth dry as the Sahara.

Ah.... finally the sound of my last name echoing down the hall.

fact or fictionFirst DraftStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Hope Martin

Find my fantasy book "Memoirs of the In-Between" on Amazon in paperback, eBook, and hardback, in the Apple Store, or on the Campfire Reading app.

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I am a mother, a homesteader, and an abuse survivor.

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    You've captured the feel of the ER waiting room quite well with this poem.

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    Perfect description of a medical environment.

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Oh, this really works! I want to know more after this sensory ride!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Well that perfectly summed up the experience!! I felt relief at that last line, lol. Great one, Hope :)

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