The Vanishing Hour
When Time Pauses, Truth Whispers Through the Shadows

Poem
At 3:17, the clocks forgot to tick.
The world inhaled
and never exhaled.
Shadows grew longer than time should allow,
slipping under doors,
whispering secrets in voices I once knew.
The lamp flickered
though there was no wind.
The photo on the wall…
smiled differently.
I watched the hour vanish
not fade,
not pass,
but vanish,
like breath against glass in the cold.
My phone lost signal.
The mirror refused to show me back.
Even my heartbeat paused
as if time had taken it for ransom.
Footsteps echoed in the attic.
But I live alone.
A child's laughter crawled through the hallway.
But I have no child.
And then I saw it
not a figure,
but a presence
draped in silence, wearing the face
of someone I loved
but lost long ago.
“Come,” it whispered,
“the hour is thin. You must decide.”
Between memory and oblivion,
between waking and sleep,
between staying...
and vanishing too.
I chose to write.
To remember.
To fight the fade.
So if you read this,
and your clock ticks strange,
and your walls breathe,
don’t run.
Just listen.
The Vanishing Hour comes for all
but only those who fear it
disappear.
About the Creator
Syed Umar
"Author | Creative Writer
I craft heartfelt stories and thought-provoking articles from emotional romance and real-life reflections to fiction that lingers in the soul. Writing isn’t just my passion it’s how I connect, heal, and inspire.
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