The Unsatisfactory
Free Verse

It is dangerous to speak your names
The Overton window slams to silence them
Crisis, solidarity, insanity
Adorning an ancient necropolis
Crowded with the inert, frustrated dead
Unable to criticize or complain
Or explain your slithering, symbolic significance
We struggle to recognize you
Our age has allowed wisdom
To be buried beneath an avalanche of information
The large language models are plagiarizing each other, now
We haven't much time
But we can name the first head crisis
That could be the source of improbable, ragged hope
Insofar as crises are followed by solidarity
You remember, with your three heads
War, plague, famine, calamities of all shapes
Are inevitably followed by tender, unanimous sentiments
We look at one another, amidst the smoke and the weeping
And recognize ourselves in each other's eyes
We dream together of sunny peace, gleaming on the horizon
If we can only endure the local stink and the mayhem together
We sing, we pray, we reassure one another
Halcyon days are these
Brief as they may be
Solidarity is a guest
It is not at home with us
Not any longer
If it ever was
And the third head is venomous
It is insanity
We deny the testimony of our own senses
We pretend to forget that the crisis even took place
Or we engineer preposterous fantasies
About its true nature and origins
They inevitably incriminate an old adversary
Who can somehow be blamed for this novel horror
We busy ourselves with exotic ephemera
Some starve screaming while others
Exhaust science and superstition
Seeking ways to lose weight
Images please insanity; words vex it
Our feelings become sacred
Along with our gossamer opinions
Passion rules
Reason withers
Violence bullies and censors persuasion
Wealth justifies itself
Screens hide us all
From the world and one another
While they lie about keeping us informed
Machines write our eulogies and our love letters
They all sound suspiciously familiar
Dripping with cliches
Assembled like Ikea furniture
When the third head speaks
It speaks loud, hypnotic gibberish
Amusing, distracting, meaningless
Mad as mercury
These are the three heads of a single, strange thing
Divine or diabolical, it is both history and prophecy
But there will be a crisis
Bulging with annihilation
Ravenous enough to devour the others
And then itself
Before it is too late
We must try to stick with solidarity
We must not awaken from the dream
In which there is no human I am not being
No innocence that I am willing to destroy
Even if the orders, or the money, or the influence seem irresistible
If we are genuinely exhausted and dismayed by all of the lies
Why do we listen most closely to the most florid, unashamed mendacity?
We must try to stick with solidarity
We have only one enemy:
The unsatisfactory
It is impossibly efficient
Run by an ingenious, sadistic insomniac
Intent upon making it clear that every party
Makes an expensive mess and includes an embarrassing incident
Which will be captured and shared
This is our life
All we can do is try to understand it
Well enough to make it more bearable
For every being resigned to it
Before the monster with its many heads
Shows us the way to the necropolis
We will be just like all that try to rest in war
In its stones and shadows and sand
Soon enough
About the Creator
D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.




Comments (10)
Nice
love it
Hope lives eternal! I liked these lines: We have only one enemy: The unsatisfactory 🫶🏻🫶🏻
Brilliantly unsettling. Every line echoes the chaos we quietly accept. “We must try to stick with solidarity” — a plea we can’t afford to ignore.
Very well written
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Oooo, florid and mendacity are new words for me. Your poem was a hard punch!
Blimey. Bleak but a reflection of the times we live in. Deftly...you know the rest.