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The Unfinished Painting

Brushstrokes of Progress

By Zohaib SunesaraPublished 3 years ago 2 min read
Artwork by Lewis & Clark

The world is a canvas, painted by the hands of time

But the brushstrokes of progress are often hard to find

For every step forward, there's a step back too

And the struggle for change can make the journey seem blue

But we must not give up, we must not lose hope

For the colors of change will help us cope

With the injustices and the pain of the past

And make our future brighter, not meant to last

We are the painters, the shapers of fate

With each stroke of the brush, we can change our state

From a world of oppression to one of equality

From a world of hatred to one of unity

So let us paint with passion, let us paint with might

For the world we create will be a work of art, a beautiful sight

With every stroke, we bring about a change

A change for the better, a world rearranged

But the painting is not yet complete, there is still much to be done

For the canvas of the world is vast, and the journey has just begun

So let us keep painting, let us keep fighting

For a world where love and justice are always in sight.

The poem is a metaphorical slam poem about social change. It compares the world to a canvas that is painted by the hands of time, with the brushstrokes of progress being hard to find. The poem also acknowledges that for every step forward, there can be a step back, and that the journey towards change can be difficult. However, the poem encourages the reader to not give up hope, and to keep fighting for change.

The poem also compares the reader to a painter, with the ability to shape their own fate, and change the state of the world through their actions. The poem encourages the reader to paint with passion and might, to create a world that is a work of art, a beautiful sight, with love and justice at its core.

The poem concludes by emphasizing that the painting is not yet complete, and that there is still much work to be done to bring about true change in the world. It encourages the reader to keep painting and keep fighting for a better world.

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About the Creator

Zohaib Sunesara

Author @ Cuddle Pixie I dive into the depths of parenting with compassion, humor, and practical advice. With a passion for nurturing both children and parents, join me on our journey.

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