The Uncommercial Traveller (1860 - 2025)
Charles Dickens and travels through Sri Lanka

Looking down on the clouds
We fly as slow as mist
Down jungle-deep mountains
Endless tea plantations
Ravines and rivers
Crossed by old iron bridges
Water tumbles down
Cliff faces to wash the banks
Of rivers running
Through countless little towns
On the train from Ella
From Kinigama
From Ohiya
Past the road of the World’s End
All the way down
To Kandy.
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At the Majestic Tourist Hotel
Joseph is full of stories
Kumari is full of advice
And Cat (whose name is only Cat)
Is full of kittens yet to murmur
Their first purr
And I wonder if the owners
Are fans of Breakfast At Tiffany’s.
There is a strange old
Romance about them,
Like the dim-purple lake reflecting the
Final light of the jungle's
Sunset.
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On the roof of the hotel
Watching westerling sun streaming
Through cascading jungle down
Steep mountains that pour
Little houses dotted here and there
Down into Kandy’s valleys
And I
Telegram little work notes
Zoom through teleconferences
My mind already ahead an hour or two
Or behind a century or two
Lost in stories to be read at dusk of
Charitably violent goblins and
Uncharitably saved sextons and
Visits to Newgate and
Meditations in Monmouth Street and
A flight via train to Paris.
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A collection of stories travelled far
From the desk of Dickens
Long ago
Half a world away
And words from a century and a half away
Ring as true today
As Dickens describes looking out the window
From London to Switzerland in the life
Of the Uncommercial Traveller.
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On a second hand bookshelf
Half a world away
These word were found:
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Looking out the window
In that delicious travellers’ trance
Which knows no cares,
No yesterdays,
No tomorrows,
Nothing but the passing objects,
The passing scents and sounds.
About the Creator
Roderick Makim
Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.
I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.
For more: www.roderickmakim.com



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