The Tree That Silently Watched
(Formerly “@ Havana, Cuba”)
For thousands of years,
I have watched man’s blood
run thick through the river
that meanders beside me.
Rooted to this spot,
I drink memory—
violent revolutions,
toppled dreams,
tongues cut by empires
as their women continued dancing.
I have watched babies toddle
between worlds—
as sprites are wont to do.
Before growing into children
that squeal and play
on the mossy blanket
of the forest’s floor.
While growing even older,
bolder.
Making blood brothers
of each other
with sharp rocks
and quick pricks.
I’ve seen them bloom
in the storm of becoming—
limbs tangled,
hearts surrendered,
falling once more
to the velvet ground
by the river’s wandering edge
whispering promises
sealed again in blood.
Their secrets sink
into the silt.
The water hides
what it cannot forget.
I have watched silently
as they were washed clean—
lovers clothed in white linen,
blessed beneath cathedral sky,
ready to create new life,
later baptized in the river’s water,
freed from sin.
They call this land free now.
They do not hear
the old gods laughing
behind the veil.
Still—
The magic endures.
In black robes
and white dresses.
In whispered Ave Marias
and ancient chants to Yemayá.
Lucumí Orichas and Catholic saints
dancing side by side
in the four winds,
sanctified by prayer
and ancient traditions.
I remain—
rooted in the present,
Constant—
swaying and watching.
As dinner is slaughtered
on stone hearths,
Nature’s altar.
I sip from the river—
nourished—
as they break bread
over the sacrificial bird,
roasting it slowly
beneath my boughs.
The river runs red again—
blended with blood
both ancient and ordinary.
And I,
the one who watched it all,
still keep
my silence…
About the Creator
Stacey Mataxis Whitlow (SMW)
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Comments (8)
Stacey, congratulations on your win and top story- beautiful work❣😊
Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This is definitely deserving of a Top Story. I like the slow steady pace of your poetry. It's like pondering... gradually expressing thoughts and feelings. Eloquent words. ⚡💙 Bill⚡
Beautifully descriptive, I was right there by the river. Thankyou for sharing and congratulations on Top Story xx
The blend of myth, memory and ritual here is absolutely stunning. Truly immersive.
I love the tension you build between violence and nature great poem
I often wondered if the trees could talk - what would they say. Nicely done!! I would like to ask you a question Stacy, "How do you become a vocal investor?
And I...who watched it all...still keep my silence...(nice) That tree is talking....