The Tree That Hung Over The River's Edge
Based on a true story

Today I took a walk down by the river,
And I sat on a tree that hung over the edge.
The ground beneath washed away with erosion,
But the roots running deep held the tree in it's place.
One day this tree is destined to fall,
Never again will I see it stand tall.
Until that day it refuse's it's fate,
It has planted it's roots to stay in one place.
It will not give up as it clings onto land,
And neither should you, with the world in your hand.
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I went on a walk today and felt inspired by a tree that hung over the edge of the river, refusing to fall and drift away the tree held it's ground and stayed in it's place. It made me think of my life and my own personal struggles, the tree is falling into the river with no chance of ever standing as tall as it did before, yet it still won't give up. So why would I give up when I do have a chance at growing taller? I'm not hanging over a river waiting to fall, I still have a chance so I'll give it my all.
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Dylan
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Comments (10)
This is thought provoking! Thank you so much for sharing such a powerful experience. :)
This was so good. It flowed so well and took me on the walk with you. Happily subscribed
Good one Dylan. 😊👍 I also loved the personal reflection at the end.
This was such a great piece about resilience, perseverance and bravery in the face of adversity! I loved it and I love the lessons you drew from the tree you used as inspiration! Nature is such a beautiful thing, great work Dylan!
What a great metaphor. 💖
I love this poem. Thanks for sharing. The strength and power of nature . There are wonderful things to see on walks.
This is beautiful and inspirational. Well done.
Such a nice inspiration 😍😉
That's fantastic poetry Dylan and an inspirational message that's worthy of such good writing. Nicely done!
beautiful