The time
--a dream of a morn with you
it is the time
All is well
You wake up
I see your face
You are so nice,
We kiss
It is
Soft out with the sun
And you are mine
And I am for you
A hush in the morn,
As we have our day flip
Into eve,
Moon is your glow, I taste a tart
Star on your lips
It is the best time
Hush on the peak,
With you by my side
I can't lose.
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By Melissa Ingoldsby3 years ago in Poets
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Aww this is so beautiful!! Great entry!! ❤️
So sweet, Melissa. ❤️
Awww, this was so sweet Merly! Is this for the latest challenge? Because if it is, 'mount' is five letters.
What a lovely vision.
Good work. Thanks for sharin
So Romantic 💕💋