The Swing's Last Song
Where gravity learned to grieve

Mama’s oak watched over me
its wide arms holding rope and plank
while I swung through the summer air
each push a small prayer
to whatever gods care about going higher
Her voice drifted in the wind
"Pump your legs sweet child reach for the sky"
The swing held secrets
clouds tasted like cotton candy dreams
the earth spun dizzy beneath my bare feet
and flight lived in that tiny pause
between going up and coming down
I soared again and again
arms wide like bird wings
hair streaming behind me
shadow skipping across the grass
to the rhythm of my heartbeat
Until the day her voice fell silent
Until the rope wore thin
and memory had to take its place
Until the oak kept watch over quiet
Now I am fifty seven
time blurring its edges
but I still feel that weightless moment
the surrender when the earth let go
and I flew higher and higher
on wings made of childhood
and Mama's laughter
The swing is empty now
But somewhere between breath and being
I am still flying
Still reaching for the sky
Still ten years old endless as summer
while her voice drifts in the wind
a blessing a song
that carries me
through all the falling days
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.



Comments (3)
I love the way you captured that weightless moment between going up and coming down. It too me back to my childhood, I spent so much time on our swing!
Gorgeous work Tim! So soothing 4 the spirit! Thx 4 sharing my friend!
You captured that youthful joy of swinging so wonderfully. Memories of me living that freedom and then my children filled me with joy