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The Supermarket Car Park

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By Lynx👑Published about a year ago 1 min read
The Supermarket Car Park
Photo by Lama Roscu on Unsplash

In the sprawling savannah of tarmac and paint,

Where wild-eyed shoppers prowl, their trolleys tilted,

The supermarket car park, oh, constraint

Of concrete jungle, where dreams are sifted.

See the elderly couple, armed with list,

Their battle plan for aisles of plenty,

And the frazzled mother, in her minivan,

Her children, in the back, in endless twenty

Questions, demands, and the occasional scream,

A symphony of suburban dreams.

Observe the lonely seagull, out of place,

In the sea of steel and glass, his cries ignored,

As he squabbles with a wayward shopping cart,

His dignity, like yesterdays' news, afforded.

And the parking warden, in his hi-vis vest,

A shepherd of the painted lines' domain,

With a click and a flick, he leaves his mark,

A ticket, a reprimand, a cause of pain.

Yet here, in this absurd, mundane expanse,

Life, in all its trivial glory, dances.

Ode

About the Creator

Lynx👑

I'm thrilled to be a part of the vocal.media community. Writing has always been my passion, and I'm excited to share my stories.

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  • Manisha Dhalaniabout a year ago

    This gave me a sense of nostalgia. Very nicely written.

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