The Sun, The Heat And Those Ray Bans
Temperatures Rising
This is my response to the following prompt from Rick's Vocal + Assist fb group writing challenge: This time we will write a poem of at least 100 words.
The theme of the poem is Blood Pressure and use the word Beautiful and a word that rhymes with it in the poem.
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Driving well past the speed
On this hot July eve
Windows down
Being cooled by the breezes
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There’s a chill in the air
None come close to compare
To the ones
up the back of my hair- line
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Flashes of blue and of red
Have my blood pressure steadily
Rising higher than ever before
Clearing my throat, with my hands visible on the wheel - as she calmly approaches my door
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I watch her in my mirror, as she heads my way
I’d never seen another woman so beautiful
In her blue button downs and polarized rays
Officially offering my citation so dutifully
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Maybe if we had met on a cooler day
She would have noticed much more than my speed
But if this heat continues and speed catches her eye
She will be seeing a lot more of me
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (3)
This is clever, and so well done. Love it.
Oh, that was great! Loved it :)
Cute and clever... I love it...