In twilight, the radiant sphere descends with grace
leaving behind tranquility and a warm embrace
Once it was on top with all its glow
But sadly, now it has to go
Giving us a serene ambience of hue
Ah! it departs with an ethereal view
A departure is such, a departure this is
As the Sun descends with golden kisses
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So lovely ☺️
Lovely pic. Beautiful description of the sun going down to rest. Nature is so beautiful.
Beautiful
Just, amazing! I loved this!
Beautiful description of the sun. Love your imagery in this poem. Excellent job, excited to read more from you.
Fantastic! Your words paint a vivid and serene picture of the sunset, a symbol of both the end and the beauty of life's fleeting moments. The way you describe the golden descent of the sun, leaving behind a peaceful embrace of warmth and tranquility, evokes a sense of calm reflection. The imagery of a glorious ascent followed by a gentle departure feels like a metaphor for life itself—bright, full of energy at its peak, but inevitably fading into the quiet embrace of night.
beautiful!