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The Sulking Soldier

A Sonnet for Poppy

By D. J. ReddallPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Son of Peleus, valiant Argonaut

And lovely Thetis, immortal nereid

Achilles, for the Achaeans you fought

Until Agamemnon would not concede

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That beguiling Briseis was your prize;

Usurped and disparaged, you seethed with wrath

No coward, you cut armies down to size

In roiling Styx, Thetis gave you a bath

Gripping your heel, she made your flesh like steel

But one lacuna left you vulnerable

A lion in battle, your might was real

Until Paris’ arrow made you crumble

Your anger filled Homer’s lungs with song

Slain, to an undying tale you belong

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This poem was prepared in response to Poppy's provocative prompt; you can find more information about her latest bouquet of them below:

Sonnet

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D. J. Reddall

I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.

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  • Poppy 6 months ago

    I'm learning so much from these poems😄well done!

  • D.K. Shepard6 months ago

    Wonderfully wrought, D.J.! Great portrait of Achilles!

  • "Your anger filled Homer’s lungs with song" Oooo, I especially loved this line!

  • JBaz6 months ago

    You told the entire battel of Troy in this. 'That is why no one will forget his name'

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