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The Stranger Inside You

He asked no questions

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Last night, a stranger knocked

not on my door

but in my soul

He wore my face

but his eyes

belonged to the stars

He asked no questions

He simply sat

as if my silence

were an old friend

I offered him fire

he gave me

a mirror made of wind

“Who are you?” I asked

He smiled

“I am the one you become

when you stop trying to be”

The world outside

chased its own noise

but inside

we shared a stillness so wide

it could hold a thousand storms

When dawn came

he vanished

but not entirely

Now when I walk

my shadow listens

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    The thought of meeting a version of yourself when you’re not trying to be anything... kind of beautiful.

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