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The Spirit Lights That Dance in the Sky

A show for a passing experience

By Marie381Uk Published 24 days ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Spirit Lights That Dance in the Sky

They rose without sound,

soft colours stitched into the night,

moving like memories that refused to stay buried,

each glow a whisper of someone who once breathed.

I watched them sway above the fields,

not stars, not angels, not lies,

just souls learning how to travel

after the weight of living was finally lifted.

Some flickered like nervous hearts,

others burned steady, calm, unafraid,

as if death had answered a question

life never dared to ask.

I felt my chest open watching them,

grief loosening its grip for a moment,

the sky holding what the ground could not,

the dead teaching the living how to rise.

They did not come to haunt us,

they came to remind us,

that even broken lives leave light behind,

and even endings know how to dance.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • WILD WAYNE : The Dragon King24 days ago

    Well done Marie. Loved this line > > " the dead teaching the living how to rise." Power to your creativity.

  • Lana V Lynx24 days ago

    Beautiful, Marie.

  • Fathi Jalil24 days ago

    You have such a gift for making grief feel lighter. I’ve definitely had moments where I looked at the sky and felt like someone was watching. Such a stunning poem! 🕊️💖

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