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The Sound That Broke the Sky

Silence, After

By Diane FosterPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Image created by author in Midjourney

There was a bang—

not thunder, not door-slam,

but a bone-deep cracking

like the sky’s own backbone snapping.

It echoed through the marrows of the hallway,

down wallpapered veins

of this house that never whispered,

only watched.

I stood barefoot on the linoleum—

cold-washed, breath hitched,

heart hiccupping like a broken siren

drowning under its own scream.

And the walls,

once papered in birds and strawberries,

peeled back like eyes

too tired to stay closed.

Images, I think,

spilled from the living room mirror.

I saw them crawl,

shadow-flickers wearing

Grandma’s church coat,

Mum’s angry perfume,

a hymn half-sung

and torn in half by silence.

The bang still lingers.

A bell without a tongue

ringing through teardrops

I’m too stubborn to let fall.

They gather behind my eyeballs

like secrets,

like Dad’s drawer of things I’m not supposed to know.

I walk down the hallway.

My feet make no sound—

numb toes,

a hush of movement

like I'm part of the dust now.

In the corner:

the crooked family photo,

smiling like liars caught in the act.

I call out.

No one answers.

Only the clock ticks—

an old, indifferent metronome

measuring out pain

in spoonfuls too big to swallow.

The front door is wide open.

Outside, everything is grey,

painted over in

unfeeling strokes.

Even the sun has forgotten

how to light.

They told me once

that teardrops are just

the soul’s way of sweating.

If that’s true,

I must be drowning

inside something I cannot see.

I crouch behind the couch.

That’s where the sound came from.

But all I find is absence—

a vacuum where comfort

used to hum low

like Mum’s voice

when she wasn’t afraid.

The bang took more

than sound.

It stole color,

shoved its hand

through the stained-glass of memory

and dragged out the joy.

Now the house sits—

a crypt with doilies,

and I am the girl who heard

the last melody

before it broke

into

a forever quiet.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Diane Foster

I’m a professional writer, proofreader, and all-round online entrepreneur, UK. I’m married to a rock star who had his long-awaited liver transplant in August 2025.

When not working, you’ll find me with a glass of wine, immersed in poetry.

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  • Ann ☕️10 months ago

    Oh dear, so heartbreaking 💔 Wonderfully written and thanks for sharing this incredible piece~

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    Heartwrenching

  • Caitlin Charlton10 months ago

    The rhyme of the first few lines was smooth. The skies backbone snapping is a strong imagery, makes it feel like an experience that reaches outside the person. Wallpapered veins. I could picture it. I like how much thought went into these lines, they seemed as though they were carefully picked to give the effects I am now experiencing. I am inside a house that is alive 😳🙌🏽 The heart hiccuping, I like that. Okay, when I thought you won us over enough. You went on to describe the wallpaper peeling back like eyes, I could see this so vividly. It creeps me out but the words worked so well to drive this through my minds eye. ‘Images spilled from the living room mirror’… 😲, let me read that again. Very atmospheric. ‘Grandmas church coat’, oh that’s too close to home. The part where you said the feet made no sound, is bringing me chills. It’s eerie. This was absolutely amazing, I am blown away Diane. The bang stole colour, that is so deep. The last melody… 😭 this was so sad, but I can’t help but enjoy its beauty, the voice that sung through the cracks. Outstanding! 👌🏽👏🏽♥️

  • Wonderful words drenched in sadness

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