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The Sound of Sorry

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By Mark R. CieslakPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2023
The Sound of Sorry
Photo by Rusty Watson on Unsplash

Once upon a night time, after a year alone and my only double take, something I thought dead and cold

long hidden, buried, came awake.

It's a Wonderful Terror this.

Confusion wearing designer clothes, Crossing Bridges, torn pantyhose.

So many sorries on my side. I'll owe a million more I'm sure before I die.

But give me one chance at a time,

just one,

just one.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Mark R. Cieslak

Trying to tell some of the silly stories that crowd my head. Maybe you like one. If not its still cheaper than therapy.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  3. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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  • Diana K Robinson2 years ago

    Love that. Well done.

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  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    I feel like you know me and are walking in my shoes.

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Boom, that is how you get an instant subscriber in me! This is heartbreaking and so full of emotion despite its short length! Well done on a fine poem and congrats on Top Story!

  • Nadia Babar2 years ago

    Great peom. Congrats on the top story!

  • 🎉🥹Congratulations on your Top Story- Hope you get that Chance, but This is A Great Piece 📝❤️👌🎉

  • Great poem! Well done!

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Just how poetry should be - slightly mystifying on a conscious level but touching a spot on a subconscious one. Excellent. Congrats on TS.

  • Silver Daux2 years ago

    Absolutely loved how haunting this was. Congrats on the top story!

  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    I def will return and read this again. Loved this so much. Congrats on top story!

  • Test2 years ago

    Very poignant. Congratulations of your top story 🤍

  • Rob Angeli2 years ago

    The sorries really are terrifying, excellent personification. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Morgana2 years ago

    This has so much depth—it has definitely stroked my curiosity. I’ll be pondering. Well-earned top story!

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