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The Slug

A Haiku in One Moment

By Tim CarmichaelPublished about 5 hours ago Updated about 4 hours ago 1 min read
The Slug
Photo by Coralie on Unsplash

a slug moves across

the flat rock leaving a thin

wet line behind it

Haikunature poetry

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. I write about rural life, family, and the places I grew up around. My poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, My latest book. Check it out on Amazon

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  • Harper Lewisabout 5 hours ago

    Wait, where’s its shell? That snail is naked (or a slug), and ooh, stepping on one barefoot is worse than (though not as painful as) a leggo.

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