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The sky Stood Still love Is Dead

The earth drowned in salty sorrowful tears

By Marie381Uk Published 9 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The sky Stood Still Our Love Now Dead

A thousand stars forgot to shine

the day you said you were no longer mine.

Just one moon lost its glow.

What happened to us I just don’t know.

The sun alone went cold and dim,

no outlook for us, I couldn’t win.

The universe was lost in horror

all because for us there’s no tomorrow.

I Now silence claws at every sound,

memories buried, never found.

Your name still burns beneath my skin,

a war I fight, I’ll never win.

The night won’t end, it only spreads—

a graveyard built inside my head.

Love turned to ash, breath into stone.

I lie beside it, all alone.

The Rain poured down like salty tears

The earth died, drowned in my hearts fears.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Susan Payton9 months ago

    So very sad, Marie. It was a hard read. Nicely Done!!

  • Calvin London9 months ago

    Really liked this poem Marie, it expresses such a deep sentiment.

  • Mark Graham9 months ago

    Good job on a poem that would make one think about various things.

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