The Sky's Forgotten Letters
Prompt 6/10/2025

He used to write to me,
making shapes from thin stratus,
gray sheets tucking me in,
with tall-tales of charcoal nights,
filtering the moon's pale face
into a gossamer glow
that sang sweetly in the cirrus,
thin, wispy,
the feathered edges of whispered dreams.
His words hung thick, prominent ashen ink
On smokey pages of the stratocumulus,
holding hands with tree-top leaves,
weaving in their branches,
whispering of love.
But it always dissipated in the heat
of the sun's golden, demanding beams,
the thin breadth of it fickle,
content to return to crown Apollo
sparkling, iridescent in the cirrostratus,
as if He hadn't just robbed the valley
of the mystery of morning.
How I long to lie in a field of daisies
and read the scrolls of cumulus filled blue,
cotton shapes, shifting,
kitted into whatever my heart could see.
Perhaps it was all just imagining,
finding lines in words
only ever made of air.
I roar deep and low,
pewter patinaed with disappointment,
and find only echoes within the cumulo.
He has left me,
wan and sooty in the nimbostratus,
constantly weeping,
knowing the sky has forsaken me.
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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Outstanding
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Comments (9)
"Your story truly touched me. It's not just words—it's a reflection of strength, truth, and human experience. Keep writing, the world needs more voices like yours."
light, breezy and deeply touching
You’ve woven a rich visual full of movement and emotion - bravo!
Soulful
❤✨ Your words drifted into my heart like cirrus on a quiet morning — delicate, dreamy, and full of whispered love. I could feel the warmth of memory and the ache of longing wrapped in every vaporous line. This was more than poetry; this was sky-written emotion. ☁️💙❤
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Congratulations Top Storyan! 😊
melancholy and ethereal. Clouds are such magical things, like giant puffs of inspiration. 👏👏👏
Very touching. Felt it really. Fabulous stuff @Ellie Hoovs