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The Silencing Winter's Whisper

The first snowfall

By Henrik HagelandPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
The Silencing Winter's Whisper
Photo by Erica Marsland Huynh on Unsplash

Darkness envelops us

in the all too early evening,

the clouds' fullness stole the light,

dark and heavy threats.

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You will walk your usual paths,

the cold bothers only me.

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A tingling visit on my cheek,

the lifted gaze sees it,

Small white flakes

thrown out from the bed of clouds

Like feathers from a duvet.

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Descending slowly onto the

too warm earth,

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Disappearing invisibly,

A little longer until

the shared effort

has cooled the surface,

forming a white sheen

and the droplet on the last leaf

freezes in transparent beauty

not seen by the hurried.

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The crystals stack up

with their jagged edges.

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You lick a cooling blade of grass,

Shake the fur with joy,

Anticipation for a race in high piles.

Is it possible?

The hat warms my freezing head.

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A glowing layer of white

protects against the wind's bite.

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Patches of the field are covered,

Everything slowly evens out.

The moon's light passes

hurried by the clouds' sprinkle,

The mind brightens.

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The speed of life

slows down,

forced by the lack of visibility

and the inadequacy of the tools

to withstand nature's course.

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The snow falls, and many are surprised.

You love it.

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My boots

press down the footprints,

Soon to fall as one with

the erasure of chance.

We find the way,

Walking toward the window's blurry light,

Through the falling flakes.

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The surprising first snow

in the winter's white wonder.

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A worried glance out the window,

You curl up in your warm basket,

Fur cleaned by the snow,

The thickness of the snow layer increases.

Will the world come to a halt?

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Tomorrow you will try

to eat the served snow dessert,

Unconcerned by human troubles.

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About the Creator

Henrik Hageland

A poet, a writer of feelings and hope. A Dane and inhibitant of the Earth thinking about what is to come.

A good story told or invented. Human all the way through.

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  • River and Celia in Underland about a year ago

    Such a beautiful perspective. I often wonder what it might be like to be removed from human troubles 💜 C

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    And how did you know that wolves and dogs are my favourite creatures? Marvellous, Henrik!

  • This was so lovely and wonderful! Loved your poem!

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Aww, what a beautiful poem, just a man with his dog taking a snow walk.

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