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The shine of the sun, heart of the fire

For Poppy's Colour Prompt!

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
The shine of the sun, heart of the fire
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The shine of the sun

Yolk so sweet

The glow of the buttercup

early rise in the sky

The high-vis sign of safety

lemon and blonde

The morning dunkable toast nectar

lush like honey

The feeling of uncertainty

ochre so bright and bold

The stripes of the pollenators

welcoming the day

The heart of the fire

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Thanks for reading!

Author's Note: For Poppy's colour prompt, you can find out more about here:

Hope you enjoy it! At least it's a bit more cheerful than some of my other recent pieces. Plus....there's a hidden acrostic! :)

If you have time and inclination, have a look at these, please:

Also, please take a look at the rest of my work here.

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Nice work Paul! 👏😊

  • Kristen Balyeat2 years ago

    Every single line was honey to my ears! This is beautiful, Pal! Gorgeous descriptions and perfect entry!

  • Every other line. "Y-e-l-l-o-w" Very clever. Warm & sweet.

  • Yellow is My favorite color 🎨

  • Nice Opening 📝♥️👍😉

  • Poppy 2 years ago

    I adore this poem!! It has to be one of my new favourites of yours! I'd copy my favourite line but I think it's all of them. So well done Paul!

  • I'm losing my mind trying to find the acrostic! 😫 I give up. Please tell me what it is 🥺

  • Loved this poem… warm positive vibe!

  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    Ooh i found the acrostic! Clever you! Love this! I am immersed in hufflepuff, lol. I wrote a yellow poem too the other day. Funny, same wavelength. I haven't posted it yet though.

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