
In the night
in some dark hour
the dying was already over.
Winter, the stalker,
had pounced.
At the far end of the platform
over the glinting tracks
dawn rose pink, empty, and
innocent.
The little pools of murky water
had frozen into silver mirrors.
The Ailanthus trees along the chain-link
twinkled just like chandeliers.
The squat concrete station
made for utility, not for beauty
had been transformed into a palace, all pastel and crystal,
but I had hardly noticed.
In my head, I was composing emails
my to do list tabulating like ticker tape
deciding what to worry about today,
and what could wait.
Turning to the timetable,
the wind catches my chin between its stiff fingers
sucks the breath from my throat, tears into my eyes
demands I look at what it's done.
And gasping, shatter-eyed
I know at last what winter has done,
the sharp and beautiful thing winter has done.
And all that could wait a moment ago,
here at knifepoint of rosy-fingered dawn, cannot.
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Comments (5)
I like how you’ve used violent or brutal imagery to set up winter’s presence, rather than the typical “frosted snowflakes fell” prose. It’s stark and fits nicely ❄️
so deep and profound, love the way you twist winter into this dark sinister thing.
This is absolutely stunning. Truly one of my favorite poems I've read on here- the profundity of winter's beauty, captured eloquently in a moment.
Wow, Ava! This is powerful! Well done!
Just wow, the imagery of nature demanding your attention is beautiful. Beautiful.