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The sharp and beautiful thing

a poem

By Ava MackPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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In the night

in some dark hour

the dying was already over.

Winter, the stalker,

had pounced.

At the far end of the platform

over the glinting tracks

dawn rose pink, empty, and

innocent.

The little pools of murky water

had frozen into silver mirrors.

The Ailanthus trees along the chain-link

twinkled just like chandeliers.

The squat concrete station

made for utility, not for beauty

had been transformed into a palace, all pastel and crystal,

but I had hardly noticed.

In my head, I was composing emails

my to do list tabulating like ticker tape

deciding what to worry about today,

and what could wait.

Turning to the timetable,

the wind catches my chin between its stiff fingers

sucks the breath from my throat, tears into my eyes

demands I look at what it's done.

And gasping, shatter-eyed

I know at last what winter has done,

the sharp and beautiful thing winter has done.

And all that could wait a moment ago,

here at knifepoint of rosy-fingered dawn, cannot.

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About the Creator

Ava Mack

Poetry and little thoughts

Boston, MA

www.avamariemack.com

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  • Joe O’Connor7 months ago

    I like how you’ve used violent or brutal imagery to set up winter’s presence, rather than the typical “frosted snowflakes fell” prose. It’s stark and fits nicely ❄️

  • T. Lichtabout a year ago

    so deep and profound, love the way you twist winter into this dark sinister thing.

  • Gabriel Huizengaabout a year ago

    This is absolutely stunning. Truly one of my favorite poems I've read on here- the profundity of winter's beauty, captured eloquently in a moment.

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Wow, Ava! This is powerful! Well done!

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