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I have written my life
On tiny white petals
And have scattered the petals into the wind.
The Shadows will come
Demanding dues
And I, gathering the petals –
Those I find in cold robes of grey and muslin,
Which the Shadows have swathed –
Will see there are still tiny white petals
Scattered, beyond the clutches
Of the grim, grisly fingers
(And wish I had written more)
Until the Shadows come
At last
To claim my precious, white, life drops
And I find they are done.
Then do I rescue what remain
And step into the Shadows,
Clutching the withered petals to my breast
About the Creator
Marie McGrath
Things that have saved me:
Animals
Music
Sense of Humor
Writing



Comments (6)
This was soooo beautifully penned! Loved your poem!
Your poem beautifully encapsulates the ephemeral nature of life and the inevitability of its end. It's both moving and thought-provoking.
your craftsmanship is amazing-- unsettling and beautiful
Oh, this is elegantly eerie—like dropping poetry into the wind and watching it dance before the Shadows snatch it up. Love the wistful “wish I had written more” moment. Feels like a poet’s eternal struggle, huh? Beautifully done!
Oh wow, this is impressive! Love your poem~
Nice work . Please check my stories out as well if you get a chance.