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The Shadows

...the white petals

By Marie McGrathPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
The Shadows
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I have written my life

On tiny white petals

And have scattered the petals into the wind.

The Shadows will come

Demanding dues

And I, gathering the petals –

Those I find in cold robes of grey and muslin,

Which the Shadows have swathed

Will see there are still tiny white petals

Scattered, beyond the clutches

Of the grim, grisly fingers

(And wish I had written more)

Until the Shadows come

At last

To claim my precious, white, life drops

And I find they are done.

Then do I rescue what remain

And step into the Shadows,

Clutching the withered petals to my breast

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About the Creator

Marie McGrath

Things that have saved me:

Animals

Music

Sense of Humor

Writing

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran11 months ago

    This was soooo beautifully penned! Loved your poem!

  • Tales by J.J.11 months ago

    Your poem beautifully encapsulates the ephemeral nature of life and the inevitability of its end. It's both moving and thought-provoking.

  • Katherine D. Graham11 months ago

    your craftsmanship is amazing-- unsettling and beautiful

  • Komal11 months ago

    Oh, this is elegantly eerie—like dropping poetry into the wind and watching it dance before the Shadows snatch it up. Love the wistful “wish I had written more” moment. Feels like a poet’s eternal struggle, huh? Beautifully done!

  • Ann ☕️11 months ago

    Oh wow, this is impressive! Love your poem~

  • Nice work . Please check my stories out as well if you get a chance.

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