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The Shadowed Stag

What We Seek Evades Us

By Rebecca A Hyde GonzalesPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
The Shadowed Stag
Photo by HorseRat on Unsplash

At the forest’s edge he stands—

a stag antlered with flame,

shadows clothed around his body

like armor,

like smoke.

No breath stirs in the trees.

No bird dares to call.

Even the river waits,

its silver tongue stilled.

I move to draw the string,

but the bow turns to bone in my hand,

and the arrow to ash.

The forest has chosen:

he is not mine to claim.

The stag turns,

and the world bends with him—

the path unravels into mist,

the roots withdraw into earth,

the sky folds shut.

Only his gaze remains,

piercing, impossible,

a mark upon my soul.

When I lunge forward,

the clearing collapses.

I am left among trees

that whisper of fire and shadow,

their trunks still trembling

from the thunder of his hooves.

nature poetry

About the Creator

Rebecca A Hyde Gonzales

I love to write. I have a deep love for words and language; a budding philologist (a late bloomer according to my father). I have been fascinated with the construction of sentences and how meaning is derived from the order of words.

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