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The Shadow at My Shoulder

A Villanelle of Haunting

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 2 months ago 1 min read

The shadow at my shoulder will not fade,

Its hollow eyes that watch me in the night.

I scream against the bargain that we've made.

Through every dawn and dusk, through sun and shade,

It follows close, a specter burning bright.

The shadow at my shoulder will not fade.

I rage against this debt that must be paid,

My fists are clenched, my teeth are bared to fight.

I scream against the bargain that we've made.

What foolish oath, what promise once I gave?

Now bound to walk beside this ghostly blight.

The shadow at my shoulder will not fade.

My fury tears the air, but I'm afraid

Of what I've done, of what will come to light.

I scream against the bargain that we've made.

No prayer, no plea can free me from this trade,

This double bound in darkness and in fright.

The shadow at my shoulder will not fade,

I scream against the bargain that we've made.

Villanelle

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Tiffany Gordon2 months ago

    Brilliantly-crafted!

  • Sandy Gillman2 months ago

    Gorgeous and haunting. The repetition drives the emotion perfectly.

  • Demure2 months ago

    wow!!!! amazing just amazing

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