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The Serpent’s Coil

The sly one awakes

By Marie381Uk Published 10 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Serpent’s Coil

I drew the mark with broken glass,

A circle scorched in withered grass.

No plea for gods, no need for grace.

Just shadow called to take its place.

It came not loud, but soft and still,

A whisper sliding down the will.

Its voice was mine, yet deeper toned.

A truth I feared, but never owned.

I won’t consume, it swore with glee,

I’ll only show what’s truly thee.

So coil by coil, it climbed inside.

No force, no scream, no need to hide.

It offered power, sharp and sweet,

A kingdom built beneath my feet.

And in return, it asked no gold.

Just every lie I ever told.

Now I wear it, calm and proud,

Its hiss the wind, its oath unbowed.

I am the voice beneath the skin.

The serpent smiles. I let it in.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • C. Rommial Butler10 months ago

    Well-wrought! Elegant lines expressing a complex theme! "There's a shadow just behind me, Shrouding every step I take." -Tool, "Sober"

  • Oooo, this was awesomeeee! I loved it!

  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    What a way to describe a 'real' snake as well as someone who maybe a 'snake'. Good job.

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