Submerged deep within your moist embrace
I am at peace!
Eyes closed. Breath suspended!
I am yours!
One with this mystery that is you
I drink from your abundant vast expanse!
What are you?
Fluid, what is your mystery, your secret?
You quench our deepest thirst and desire
You are everywhere!
Yet within us from the beginning of time;
Our lifeforce.
Are you just pH, Potential of Hydrogen
Balancing your neutrality or acidity against my body.
Yet you are so much more.
Macro and Micro nutrients, sustaining life
Hydrogen and Oxygen
Gaseous, liquid and solid
Plentiful and true
You give life, you take life
In your liquid form
You are but the aggregates of water molecules
Forming and reforming continually!
Evaporation, condensation, precipitation and dew
You are so many things!
Resurfacing from your depth
I breathe deeply!
I lie still within your embrace
The blue sky smiles from above
I am Home!
Comfort and care for me!
I am at peace.
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So scientific and epic. I keep running across just absolute great poems and writers and this is no exception - keep up the good work!
this is beautiful, and very comforting. Well done.
This was so deep! I absolutely loved this!
Beautiful!!
This is amazing!