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The sea took you

An old poem of mine

By Lane BurnsPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
The sea took you
Photo by Jeremy Bishop on Unsplash

He was a loved one

Lost at sea

But his existence cut me

Cold and free.

His icy blue windows

Burned me

Now I am a loved one

Lost at sea

With the waves of the ocean

Washing over me

He left me breathless

Happy to be

Now we are loved ones

Bound and free

Connect souls

Always to be

love poems

About the Creator

Lane Burns

I am a Poet and an inspiring short story, one day novel writer.

I like to write in free verse mostly, but am heavily inspired by Emily Dickenson, and tend to create my own rules and ideas as well.

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