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The Saving

A Poem

By Canuck Scriber Lisa LachapellePublished 2 years ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read

The Saving

To be of sanguine shine

For no sheep, bird and swine

An inner waking for a shepherd

Fails off all calamity

Curtains a tempered breeze

A hallowed sport

Stopped firm in race

Humanity cries in bitter disgrace

For the attack of the innocent

The purpose never to fall from grace

To keep a smile always

Give thanks to the very air for breath to match

To share, to brighten, to cleanse the winds

The earth, the dust, the measured how

In each step we take

Harnessed and sorting with the human race

The waters so begin, oh, cherished ship

The crippling artifacts of time

The trembling, crawling, fate behind

Yeah, bring the cherished stock

For us humbled, gracious, living flock

Those redeemed in acts of kindness

Unfettered under errors blasphemous

That corner all despair

So leave that there

New life awaits

Harpsichord will know the time

Feathered wake acknowledged then in sink or swim

On your own course

For mine is bitter haste

In crippling fear

That may forsake the moment

While future harnesses marbles of truth

To throw at the doors

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Entered into the Oxford Poetry Prize but alas, not this time.

inspirational

About the Creator

Canuck Scriber Lisa Lachapelle

Vocal Top Story 13 times + Awesome Story 2X. Author of Award Winning Novel Small Tales and Visits to Heaven XI Edition + books of poems, etc. Also in lit journal, anthology, magazine + award winning entries.

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  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Very Powerful! Lovely work!

  • I'm so sorry this didn't get in 🥺 It was so beautifully written!

  • The last line makes me think of an old song I first heard on SNL, paraphrased for the occasion here: "Someone's throwin' marbles at the door, sometimes hittin' the bell. Do me a favor, open the door & let 'em in." Beautiful poem. Thanks for the advice.

  • Great piece! Very beautiful! Can’t wait to see more!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is a beautiful piece. Nicely done.

  • Beautiful. Wonderfully written. With much depth and care.

  • Great piece ❤️💯👌📝im glad to see you published on here-✌️💭😉

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