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The Salamander Cursed the Rose

Thorns now can hurt and wound a heart

By Marie381Uk Published 8 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Salamander Cursed the Rose

In the soil where secrets coil

a creature rose from ash and oil

his skin aglow with cobalt flame

a harbinger who bore no name

He found the rose in morning hush

its bloom as red as battle blush

and whispered low with venom breath

I curse your charm to deal out death

No lover’s hand shall pluck you now

no gentle cheek shall feel your bough

each thorn shall pierce with poisoned will

a kiss of beauty made to kill

The petals heard and did not cry

for flowers learn to bleed and lie

and so she stood in bloom and grace

with murder hidden in her face

Now garden soil her murderous bed

no worm will crawl where roots have fed

even the wind forgets her name

it fears the thorn that earned her flame

Yet still the salamander stays

unchanged across a thousand days

his curse a vow he can’t rescind

he watches what it brought to end

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Calvin London8 months ago

    Great poem, and I love the image.

  • Rohitha Lanka8 months ago

    This is a fascinating poem and well written.

  • Leesh lala8 months ago

    A darkly lyrical tale where beauty turns deadly, and the curse lingers longer than love ever dared to.

  • Amir Husen8 months ago

    Nice writing

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