The Sadness That I Feel, The Loss We've Made
In The Darkness of My Heart
By Sharp AimPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
In the light of day, his shadow fades
A absence that my heart can't convey
His laughter echoes through my mind
A memory that I cannot unwind
The joy he brought, the love we shared
A treasure that I'll always bear
But now he's gone, and I am left
With only dreams of what we had
The shadow of his love, a ghostly presence
A longing that will never fade
In the darkness of my heart
His absence casts a lonely part
The sadness that I feel, the loss we've made
A void that cannot be filled, a price we've paid

Comments (1)
Excellent work. This poem beautifully captures the profound sadness and longing that accompanies the loss of a loved one. The imagery of fading shadows and echoing laughter creates a poignant sense of absence, while the heartfelt expressions of cherished memories and the enduring void they leave behind are deeply moving. It's a touching tribute to love and loss, resonating with anyone who has experienced similar grief. Thank you for sharing this emotional and reflective piece.