
The Rose with Thorns by George’s Girl
In gardens where the twilight weaves,
A rose blooms soft, yet subtly grieves,
Her petals, tender, whisper sweet,
But hidden 'neath, sharp thorns entreat.
In velvet dusk, the lovers meet,
With hearts entwined, their pulses beat,
Yet shadows linger, doubts take flight,
For love, though pure, bears hidden blight.
A glance, a touch, ignites the flame,
Yet fear, like thorns, can stake a claim,
For every joy that love bestows,
There lies the price—a heart that knows.
Oh, sweet enchantress, fairest flower,
Your beauty shines in twilight's hour,
But hark! The prick of thorny plight,
A tender kiss may yield to fright.
In passion's dance, they sway and sing,
Yet know the ache that thorns can bring,
For love, though glorious, can bleed,
In joy's embrace, there lies a need.
So let us cherish both the bloom,
And honour thorns that loom with gloom,
For every rose that graces heart,
Bears testament to love's fine art.
In gardens where the shadows play,
Two souls entwine, come what may,
For every thorn that pierces through,
Is but a mark of love’s true hue.
Thus, hold me close, my dearest friend,
Through thorny paths, our love shall wend,
In every trial, let us find, true romance
Just please let us take the chance
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (2)
The fact that you’ve been writing poetry since the age of 14 is amazing, you’ve had a lot of practice and it shows here. I will save this to mention it under the next raise your voice thread once it is posted, it will be my pleasure to do this, please don’t feel you need to return the favour. This just really moved me and I appreciate you for it.
Oh my gosh… this got me speechless. You’re moving me to tears. Why is this so filled with emotions, why so good, why so intricately webbed with fine metaphors and a message so sweet, sad and thorny?