
“I can remember the first time I went to
Young, single and cool
A suburban place
Tree lined domesticated space
Stating my case
Finding you
Honest and true
Safe and secure under a romantic moon
Homes all having a family room
I must be firm
Let us return
To those days
When lone traffic signal pointed ‘one way’
Take a walk
Quietly talk
Now I have your attention
I might mention
On my knees
As you can see
Having a simple request
Easy answer on our private test
Would you be my wife?”
For life
She patiently sighed
And replied
“When I arrived
On this street
You were very sweet
During our first meet
Under the bird road sign
Never did we decline
Companionship
Plotted script
Years paraded by
We laughed and cried
Now at the corner of Peace and Dove
We are confirming our love
Heard by me and the one above
Now we made the decision
Confirming our mission
Foundation we now build
Based on trusting skill
You being Billy
And I am Lilly
Yes, I will accept your intentional eternal bliss
And will let you seal it after the parental neighborly wedding kiss”
About the Creator
Marc OBrien
Barry University graduate Marc O'Brien has returned to Florida after a 17 year author residency in Las Vegas. He will continue using fiction as a way to distribute information. Books include "The Final Fence: Sophomores In The Saddle"
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Lovely 😊