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The Race of the Goldfish

321 and swim

By Marie381Uk Published 9 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Race of the Goldfish

In a bowl, round as time, they wait—

Gold flickers poised at the water’s gate.

No crowd, clapping no need for cheer,

Just glassy silence, crystal-clear.

They dart with pomp, they twist with pride,

Each fin a flag, each turn a stride.

A race of loops, of lazy swerves,

A game of chance, not sharpened nerves.

No prize awaits the one ahead,

No crown, no laurel for the led.

Yet still they chase, and still they gleam,

Like coins dropped deep into a dream.

Around, around, the world is small—

But to them, it is the all.

And isn’t that the race we run?

No end, no judge, just laps for fun.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Irene Mugang Narewec 9 months ago

    Yes..no prize 🏆 no crown 👑..but we keep raising because it is our passion 😍 How wonderful this is.

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Such a fascinating poem and exceptional writing skills that you have shown.Good luck.

  • Shadow9 months ago

    Nice one

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