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The Quiet Places

Discovery

By Marie McGrathPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
The Quiet Places
Photo by Levi XU on Unsplash

There are no quiet places

For the tortured spirit.

There is the promise of tomorrow.

There is the font of faith.

But there are no quiet places

To escape

The savagery of the jagged nerve,

The open sore of vulnerability.

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The world is too much in me,

Its suffering mine.

But my suffering is not the world’s.

It is a minutia, and negligible.

I am embarrassed by it.

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I seek the quiet places.

They lie in nature, but not in me.

I find nature

But have lost me.

Too painful to touch, too complex to discern.

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And so I seek the purgative

To absolve me of today

The curative to rescue my tomorrow,

The healing balm.

And find in you the promise

Of a resurrected spirit

Of a quiet place

Of the peace of God.

I have but tears to give you in return.

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About the Creator

Marie McGrath

Things that have saved me:

Animals

Music

Sense of Humor

Writing

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  • Tales by J.J.10 months ago

    Your poem captures the human struggle. Beautifully expressed

  • Katherine D. Graham10 months ago

    The poem evokes melancholy, and yet speaks to the many frayed emotions everyone experiences to some extent."The savagery of the jagged nerve, The open sore of vulnerability." those words, and the expressions delivered throughout the poem, are powerful.. Beautifully done.. must get a tissue and weep a bit!

  • Test10 months ago

    ''I accept any tear of love.'' Peace spreads in the soul after we lose ourselves, as you say, and then find ourselves again in the center of the heart. 💘🌹

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