The Quiet Hunt
For the "Poetry of the Hunt" Challenge

Your dream,
the desire,
the fire within
flies right there before you
not quite,
but close,
nearly brushing your skin.
You run,
you push yourself
further and further
Your muscles are sore,
your heart drips blood.
The vision is blurry
but you won’t let the tears
crawl over the dam
'cause that would mean years
of the chase and the work
and the hunt
is blown
into the wind
and you’ll end up alone.
But sometimes to hunt
means to sit still.
Sometimes to hunt
means to let yourself feel.
Sometimes to hunt
means waiting for the sign.
Sometimes to hunt means
allowing the divine
to come to you in peace
in stillness
and quiet.
When you try to catch a leaf
falling, mid-air.
You observe,
you leap,
you miss it by hair.
It quickly changes course,
swerves out of grasp,
leaves you empty-handed
surrounded
and filled
by emptiness vast.
So, centre yourself,
be grateful, be calm,
breathe in, breathe out,
then open your heart.
Slowly learn the dance
your dream enacts
leave behind the pursuing,
instead of hunting, attract.
Sometimes to hunt
means to sit still.
Sometimes to hunt
means to let yourself feel.
Sometimes to hunt
means to wait and make room,
to let the Universe steer
the dream towards you.
About the Creator
Cristal S.
I’ve noticed when I follow the path I enjoy most, I often end up swimming upstream. So here I am, right in the middle of it – writing about it all and more. ♡




Comments (12)
This is a profound, beautifully expressed reminder that true pursuit often requires calm attraction and stillness rather than frantic chasing
Wow 👏👏👏🔥that touched every cell in my being
Amazing! This feels like it's therapy.
Great 👌
Trust your own quiet time. Let the right things come to you. You're doing great work just by knowing when to breathe and attract. Keep letting that stillness guide you. congratulations on your Top Story!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I absolutely love this—resonated so deeply. I’ve definitely achieved more with an open palm than a clinched fist. Beautiful entry! ✨🩷✨
Love the idea of hunting in stillness. Beautiful and congratulations on th TS
This was beautifully written, I loved it!
This has a lovely shift towards a more calm and peaceful surrender and like Dharr has said sometimes the things that are meant to be happen without pushing for them. Patience is often rewarded. Well done on a stunning challenge entry and Top Story!
I agree with you completely! If it happens, it happens. Loved your poem!
Beautifully written. I love how it shifts from fierce determination to peaceful surrender. Such a calming, grounded message