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ππππ πππ πππ
By Colleen WaltersPublished 4 months ago β’ Updated 4 months ago β’ 1 min read

Your petals will fall
but they will stay bright vibrant
in my memory.
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The One who made these...
A song of adoration
He sings over me.
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Colleen Walters
Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. β€οΈ
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Love the simplicity and reverence here! The way you weave the ephemeral beauty of the petals with divine careβ¦ so gentle, so vivid. πΈ
This was so wonderful! Loved your beautiful poem!
Very soft sounding. Love the picture and how the words are directed to us the reader or maybe someone in particular. Either way it pulls us in and includes us into his meaning. Nicely done π€β€οΈ