The Power
For Poetry of the Hunt
I, the subject, set out with intent,
I move to stay hidden, consider my scent.
It, the object, that coveted hide,
Will bow to my prowess, I'll not be denied.
I, the hunter, blend in, disappear,
Keep my hand steady, breathe out, show no fear.
It, the hunted, unknowing, awaits,
Unaware of my coming, possessed by the fates.
I, the seeker, search on through the heat,
Knowing that glory is mine when we meet.
It, the sought, is blithe and elusive,
But the game is not lost, only winning's conclusive.
I, the chaser, am starting to worry.
At night, in my dreams, I at last sight my quarry.
It, the runner, taunts me each dawning,
The pull of it's call draws me on through the morning.
I, the wanting, think only of it.
Restless, enthralled, my heart cannot quit.
It, the wanted, pokes fun at my want,
My scourge, my affliction, allows no détente.
I, the seduced, will not be diverted,
It lures me, obscures me, my power subverted.
It, the seducer, consumer of days,
Jeers at me, toys with me, laughs as it plays.
It, the subject, pulls me up by my strings,
Makes me dance, makes me sweat, runs round me in rings,
Me, the object, schooled, owned and bossed.
It ties me in chains, the captured, the lost.
Comments (7)
Everything said about our attachments and our hunt to keep them, Hannah! I like your presentation of the imagery...the voicing is unique!
Ha! Nice take! Even if it was just for fun, it really paints a unique perspective of the relationship between the hunter and hunted.
Who’s the hunted and who’s the hunter? The staccato rhythm and rhyme of this reminds me of the wolf’s canter, a pace slower than the prey that nevertheless wears them out in the end. I love that this ends in a mysterious note. Who I wonder, save for man, over estimates his skill and under appreciates the cunning of his adversary? Excellent and thought provoking entry to the challenge. Good luck!
Well-wrought, and an excellent use of rhyme and rhythm here!
I like the turn around here! Unexpected!
Oooo, I really liked the alternating of POVs. So creative. Loved your poem!
Dear Hannah - As a non hunter you've brilliantly made the thrill of it so enticing..! But, unlike fishing you can't catch and release. Best, j.k.in.l.a.