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The Perfect Word Was Spoken

Where shadows gather

By Diane FosterPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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(For my husband, following his successful liver transplant. With heartfelt thanks to the donor's family.)

I keep a room inside my heart for you,

Where sunlight finds its way across the bed;

A quiet portrait, faithful, constant, true,

That warms the space where once I wept with dread.

The shadows gathered when the sickness came,

The dust of all the words we feared to speak;

Your face grew thinner, yet it burned with flame

That gave me strength when I was stripped and weak.

And yet I would not banish what we share,

For love was tested deeper in despair;

The brilliant ache of life restored again

Proves still the bright world I will hold you in.

So let the candle’s flame be traced by smoke;

Its light survived, though trembling as it spoke.

Sonnet

About the Creator

Diane Foster

I’m a professional writer, proofreader, and all-round online entrepreneur, UK. I’m married to a rock star who had his long-awaited liver transplant in August 2025.

When not working, you’ll find me with a glass of wine, immersed in poetry.

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  • Pamela Williams3 months ago

    This is beautiful.

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