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I sit down to write
but when pencil hits paper
the sharpened led breaks.
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It is amazing what you have achieved here. The thematic Aposiopesis created as the pencil hits the paper suggests that the tool was not of poor quality. Instead, it feels as though the emotions surging through your veins were so intense that the pencil tip simply could not bear the weight of them. You managed to condense a profound, visceral experience into just three lines. This was truly outstanding! ๐คโค๏ธ
Ah, that's a bummer! Loved your Haiku!
Maybe the pencil just wants a coffee break too.๐
This is why I use pens ๐ญ
argh, the nightmare scenario! great haiku, Kera!
Love and Light. WOW