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The Path of Totality

A poem

By KatheleenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
The Path of Totality
Photo by Andrew Preble on Unsplash

Ever so quickly we

Came together

Laughing and loving, inventing a path

I began to walk through it but

Perhaps you looked the wrong way

Swiftly it came, swiftly you left

Even leaving my hand warm still.

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About the Creator

Katheleen

Just what is wholly unsayable.

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  • Susan Payton10 months ago

    Reading around to learn about acrostic poetry. This was kind of sad, leaving your hand still warm. Nicely Done!!

  • Gosh that was so sad and relatable. Loved your Acrostic!

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