In the expanse of your work,
Mistakes loom large, like shadows
That dim the light of progress.
Without help, you stumble in the dark,
Seeking the path to error-free excellence,
But the road is treacherous, dimly lit.
Remember, you are not alone,
For within you dwells a hidden strength,
The power of self-reflection and perseverance.
Embrace your mistakes, learn from them,
For they are seeds of growth.
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"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan5 days ago in Beat
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my favorite
BEST! I love it!
This resonates, Priya. We all make mistakes but too often blame ourselves instead of appreciating our efforts and learning from them. Well said!
How inspiring! I really enjoyed this.
This is amazing! I love it
"For within you dwells a hidden strength, The power of self-reflection and perseverance. Embrace your mistakes, learn from them, For they are seeds of growth." I love these lines. Beautifully written poem.
Love your posts!!
Great!😊💕
Extremely true! We progress with errors and the point is we shan't do the same error twice:)
This was extremely powerful! Loved your poem!
It truly reflects your ability to write poems. A great one!
An insightful poem and I enjoyed it!😊
It is only when WE persevere that we can obtain something special ...great job
The poem beautifully captures the essence of navigating through the challenges of self-improvement. It resonates with the truth that mistakes can often cast shadows on our journey, but within those shadows lies the potential for growth and transformation. The imagery of stumbling in the dark and seeking the path to excellence creates a relatable sense of vulnerability. The reminder that we are not alone, and that our mistakes can be embraced as catalysts for learning and personal development, is both comforting and empowering. This poem serves as a poignant reminder to embrace our imperfections and find strength in the process of growth.
Very Rabindranath Tagore-like!
Great message! Very true and important.