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THE OTHER SIDE

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By ishitaaaPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
THE OTHER SIDE
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My coffee tastes best

when blackest the hue is

his gaze feels warm

when dilated the pupil is

monsoon feels blue when

darkest the cloud is

I Like my coffee black

the bitter the better

I like my problems raw

the bitter the better

I love it when things go wrong

a hinge of thrill fills my eyes

the eyes widen

when broken is the ice

I love the messy room

where the footprints of bipolar lies

I love the days when no moon stars fly

I love the half burnt notes covered in dust ink

I love when there is hope at just the brink

I love the way I live with a sprinkle of ash pink in it.

P.S i wrote this a while back and honestly i didn't like it , the poem felt souless to me, now yesterday i read it again while going through my study materials as i wrote this in between one of the pages of my notes and it suddenly felt better than before so decided that maybe i should post it here. so here we are! do tell me what do you think about this one :)

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artFree VerseStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

ishitaaa

hey! this is an amateur content writer trying her best to keep up with her writings, i sometimes write poems and would love to share them.

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  • Sandy Gillman9 months ago

    Thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed this!

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