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THE OPEN SEE

Yes-SEE

By Victor MendezPublished about a year ago 1 min read

victorm5356's profile picture-I had posted this on my instagram so thought I would share it here. I couldn't remember why I titled it THE OPEN SEE..til I re-read it. One of my memories is a beautiful girl on a bench in HS with such beauty and another named Suzanne a few years younger than I who left her mark. Another beauty imprinting another memory which is the portal of time open to see your past-got it? Only the regrets are left..

THE OPEN SEE

5-11-2024

i REACH BACK WITH OPEN ARMS

b ROKEN ARMS..

h OW MANY TIMES NOW?

t HE RECORD IS BROKEN..

s CRATCHED,

i T SKIPS A BEAT..

j UMPS BACK

a GROOVE..

a ND i SEE YOU AGAIN,

s IXTEEN CANDLES OLD..

o N A BENCH..

i N A NOW SCRIPTED MOMENT,

l OVELORN EYES..

o F A BOY..

v ULNERABLE IN HIS TRANSITION..

c AN BARELY TIE HIS SHOES..

m UCH LESS,

l OVE.

w HISPERED STRAIN OF FADE INTO YOU PLAYS..

a PORTAL OPEN TO SEE..

l USTROUS EYES FROM HOPEFUL DREAMS..

a LILTING VOICE..

s PLASHES LAUGHTER LIKE AN UNCAPPED CUP,

r UNNING IN HER BREATHLESS HAND..

t IME TURNED BACK..

a N ECHO IN AN EMPTY ROOM WITH ONLY ONE MEMORY,

n AUGHT ELSE TO FILL THE NOW EMPTY CUP..

w HILE ANOTHER ECHO PLEADS..sUZANNE ET AL.

s OUL MATES,

s OUL ECHOES

r EQUITED, NOT REQUITED..

n EVER PROMISED.

e CHOES..

r EPETITIONS..

h OW MANY TIMES..

h OW MANY LIVES..

h AVE I LIVED?

i AM NOT ANGRY..

f ORLORN,

l ISTLESS.

i AM THE PRINCE IN THE PAUPER..

t HE STRUMMING OF A LONE GUITAR..

w ITH BROKEN STRINGS,

s O I PLAY YOU IN MY MEMORY..

a S I FALL THROUGH TIME..

a ND I CAN'T GET IT RIGHT..

b UT WHEN I HAVE PAID MY PENITENCE,

w HEN I HAVE HEALED THE BROKEN PIECES..

i WILL FIND YOU.

t HE TRAIN RUMBLES SLOWLY BY

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About the Creator

Victor Mendez

Born in 1958.There's a lot of road beneath these feet.Worn out pairs upon pairs of shoes.Been a ranch kid,a city kid,a Marine,a dad, a grandfather now,an avid reader and just recently began writing poetry in 2015 just to vent.

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