The old chair
Grandad loved it even though it had its day
The old Chair
The chair by the window is empty now,
No one sits on it,
It’s battered, dirty, and torn.
Grandad used to sit in it,
Brew in one hand,
Paper and pen on his knee.
He would pick his horses,
Saying, “This one’s a winner, you’ll see.”
He never had that lucky win,
He died in it, the chair I mean,
He looked peaceful, just sat there.
So Granny couldn’t get rid of his chair,
By the window, it still sits alone,
As if waiting for Grandad to come home.
So the dirty chair you see
As you pass by each day
Will be there till Granny has had her day.
Then the house will be vacant like the chair
free of the family who lived there,
For all their time on this Earth
Now house nore chair have any worth.
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Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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So poignant.. and then somewhat sad, yet there was happiness there! Congrats on your Top Story🥳🥳
This is a very good poem very good
Though it is sad and heartbreaking, it represents the potency of love for your grandfather. Well done on the top story.
This was such bittersweet and heartfelt poem that clearly reflected your love and memories so well. Congratulation, too, on the well earned Top Story.
Thank you everyone for the lovely comments
awesome. congratulations on TS. well deserved.
Wow this is beautiful!! The way you captured the weight of love, memory, and loss—an ode to the quiet, enduring presence of those we've loved👏 Congratulations on the top story
A poignant and evocative piece. The image of the empty chair, once filled with life and now a silent testament to love and loss, is deeply moving. The poem captures the bittersweet nature of memory and the enduring power of family bonds. It's a beautiful tribute to a beloved grandfather and a poignant reminder of the fleeting nature of life.
Beautiful 💕
This is such a beautiful and nostalgic poem.
This makes my heart ache...both with joy and sorrow. So well done!!
Such a beautiful, nostalgic piece! The imagery of Grandad’s chair by the window is so powerful and touching. I’d love for you to check out my poetry too if you have a moment!
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